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Xmas gifts list (Other) by lunar

For him: 1)Wings. So he can be free from the tormment of his thoughts. 2)A key. So he can unlock the cage of his mind. 3)Love. So he will not suffer anymore. For her: 1) A map. So she knows which route she will take next. 2) A tongue. So she can speak what is in her mind. 3) Hope. So she knows these feelings are not in vain.

<~> 29-Dec-02/5:38 PM
actually, the way i use the site is to see what's wrong with my poems. i'm looking for criticism on them, except for from settle, from whom i expect zeros 'cause i won't perform oral sex...any way.
i don't want to speak for any body else, but i am looking to improve my writing--looking for criticism, not praise. and you get plenty of crit from ol' p&k.




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