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The first gurl 2 eva hurt ma (Free verse) by Jazz_t

my heart hurts seein u in pain pained me i said i like u u said u like me 2 our first kiss was better den any be4 my eyes were on u and urs were on me and wat i thought i saw was a angel that i had to know the barriers between us finally broke to have others put up u listened to other people instead of ur heart and by u not listening to urs u hurt mine i never liked a gurl as much as i did u but i wasnt hurt by a gurl as much as i was by u i looked at ur chest to see if my heart was there but it wasnt then and there i knew my love wasnt to be returned it was to be left in a box on a drawer a gurl could never have it dey would hurt it

<~> 28-Dec-02/12:40 AM
well if'n she'd-a raised him right, he wouldna taken up with a floozy the likes a-her. tarnation!




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