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what is he doing?? (Free verse) by xanthippe

tiny bells echo a damp shady empty room then starts a hard rain an elaborate jungle beat life and air dancing a didjeridoo riding wind with a sitar crickets sing in time this electronic noise stormy high beat en-trance imagination passing way beyond the clouds carries me in light lets choose to disperse among the supernovas

<~> 28-Dec-02/12:16 AM
yeah. i have a poem or two on the site.
i'll re-vote after your edit.




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