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what is he doing?? (Free verse) by xanthippe

tiny bells echo a damp shady empty room then starts a hard rain an elaborate jungle beat life and air dancing a didjeridoo riding wind with a sitar crickets sing in time this electronic noise stormy high beat en-trance imagination passing way beyond the clouds carries me in light lets choose to disperse among the supernovas

xanthippe 28-Dec-02/12:13 AM
thank you for the spellcheck (and i dont mean that in a mean way) and thank you for your comment/vote, i am glad you enjoyed it :) i will have to read some of yours if you have any (haven't checked yet) :D




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