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Surpass the Dream (Free verse) by darkhelmet10

My fears are removed, My stress eliminated. I've wished for this, I've wished long and hard. This isn't what my wish was, But its better than i dreamed. To find a girl whos perfect, It's the greatest in the world. My worries have been lifted, I can focus on life. I owe it all to her, She gave me the strength. When I am lonely, She is there. When I am scared, She is there. Whenever I need her, She is there. My world is her, She is my true love.

rockinindividual 27-Dec-02/7:40 PM
sweet but sappy...not my fave..but thats just my opinion...3




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