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LucidRevelation
The rhythm of my breath beats in sync to the swirls of smoke that curl around your face. This makes me weak and needy I envy the smoke that curls around your face in the exact rhythm of my breath. Undisrupted and undecided.
dilips_10
30-Jun-02/3:20 AM
nice one
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