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lost (Free verse) by Katie

Fights and arguments, Yelling, and cussing, Confusion, and sadness, Love and happiness. Through all the pain and suffering, Through all the good times, Through our laughter, Through are pain. Were not the same, We've changed. From better to worse, To a loss of words. I'm not sure what to say around you, Not sure how to act around you. Should I walk by and scream hi, Or should I just ignore the fact that your alive? My other half I feel is gone, I feel so lost, and all alone, Without you by my side, I just want to run away and cry, where no one can hear me, or see me, alone and oh so weak.

Ornella Muti 21-Dec-02/1:37 AM
"Through are pain"...change that. For your age it's not bad, but try to experiment with different subject matters. There's more to life than guys....like smurfs.




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