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Xmas gifts list (Other) by lunar

For him: 1)Wings. So he can be free from the tormment of his thoughts. 2)A key. So he can unlock the cage of his mind. 3)Love. So he will not suffer anymore. For her: 1) A map. So she knows which route she will take next. 2) A tongue. So she can speak what is in her mind. 3) Hope. So she knows these feelings are not in vain.

lunar 19-Dec-02/1:17 PM
well thanks Gods wife for the help and mr/s poetandknowit will have to wait and see for my next poem and see what you think if that keeping in mind that none of your poems have all got 10s so it is not as though u are the most perfect poem writer.




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