poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on untitled#3 by darby pyn.

UnityMitford19 Dec 2002

the thing that distracts me right off the bat is the apostrophe in "eyes" that should be there. not to mention the "your" that should be "you're." this has a nice flow. i have no idea what it's saying, but i don't really care either because of the way it moves. 8 swastikas!