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Elegy (Free verse) by moonUnit

to Hannah, who sets a second place at the dinner table anyway. to James, who cannot cry although he knows it is expected. to Phoebe, who thinks she hears his name everywhere. to Marcus, who cradled her as she grew smaller. to Elliot, who ran into the kitchen and stopped, remembering. to us.

nentwined 18-Dec-02/9:27 AM
true, to some extent. I don't know why, I started off thinking it was biblical... and then with the first comment was almost certain of that. threw me way off track. :)




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