poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Frozen Angel by Ranger.

<~>18 Dec 2002

there are some lovely passages here, but some of your word choices, i disagree with. so much talk about 'heart' and 'timeless' makes it feel worn. also, i am not sure what the resolution is. i am assuming that the 'frozen angel' is a cursed lover? am i correct?