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Mind of War (Free verse) by t_t_redhot

Red to blue, blue to gray. The dark of night never turns to day. The flowers never bloom, birds don't sing. Death is apon us on the raven's wing. As the raven flies it takes all that is well. Everything that was is now hell. We smile for the dead, morn for the living. Happiness, as you see, is not for the giving. Death will come soon for all who believe, death is apon the raven's wing.

poetandknowit 17-Dec-02/8:31 PM
It is not jazz. Croon should give that away. In addition, it is "write." Try the exercise sometime. It might help the mental constipation of talking in circles and making even less sense. Paranoia may destroy ya. See you soon. With love, PAKI.




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