Replying to a comment on:

of people and places (final cut)I (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I was studying the pattern of a tile mosaic once. I couldn't tell you how many colors there were. Or shades of colors. Or how many there were. Each tile a little frame occupying it's own space. No competition or noise. Just being part of the whole.

INTRANSIT 17-Dec-02/6:33 PM
Well, if I am one race and you are another,can we not stand close to one another and get along just fine? Lott? Sorry, unknown. I'm completely lost on the hierarchy angle. I agree with the change of the opening line though. Readers are quickly fickle.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001