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of people and places (final cut)I (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I was studying the pattern of a tile mosaic once. I couldn't tell you how many colors there were. Or shades of colors. Or how many there were. Each tile a little frame occupying it's own space. No competition or noise. Just being part of the whole.

poetandknowit 17-Dec-02/6:24 PM
Hmmm. I am not sure that it is coming across completely. The integration of a chessboard conjures competition of the game, plus the way you speak of it sounds more like segregation. Are you pro-Lott? Plus, it also establishes a hierarchy. I think you might benefit from thinking it through a bit more. Cheers.




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