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with no words to write (Free verse) by nentwined

with no words to write, I'm writing a poem a psalm of remembrance for words that once were spun wholecloth from ethers, the ethereal nothing and embroidered with thoughts I can't grasp.

Fetylum 17-Dec-02/5:08 PM
Hm, only thing that makes me twitch is that 'can't'. I think it would have a better ring to it if spelled 'cannot' Otherwise, it's lovely ^_^!




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