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Deaf (Lyric) by sav876

Riding down the street, riding down the road, looking for a story to be told. Nothing to my right, nothing to my left, one day i wish to be more than deaf. Going through life without hearing a sound, I wonder if it's even worhth listening around. I wish this diease would just go away, but life goes on day after day. My life is a struggle just trying to maintain, wondering if tomorrow would bring a new pain. One day I'll realize I'm not deaf at all, I just hear what i want to hear, and not listen at all

nentwined 17-Dec-02/11:24 AM
a try. I like the sentiment of the last line and how it puts some twist on the rest, but... the rhymes feel canned, the rhythm flat...




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