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with no words to write (Free verse) by nentwined

with no words to write, I'm writing a poem a psalm of remembrance for words that once were spun wholecloth from ethers, the ethereal nothing and embroidered with thoughts I can't grasp.

ecargo 17-Dec-02/11:18 AM
Singular "ether" maybe?

Your last line--the change in rhythm--seems to fall flat.

I like the idea of this a lot, just needs some refining, I think.





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