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fa11ing (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

just before the fall the damn brittlebrown leaves, tin trees with veined fingers bloodless & burned down deep now dustchoked in the angles, the wailing and the whiteness mangled metal, papers pulped, dig bodies, x amount : obscene.

<~> 15-Dec-02/9:09 PM
fucking finally. thank you. one that's not pathetic.

p.s.--like the titular device.




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