poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The City (Sodom) by blkarak.

Bachus15 Dec 2002

crazy..chicago meets the ten commandments..now this is a fucking great little ditty..complicated rhyme scheme, powerful nouns, self adjusting adjectives and an beginning, and arc, and an end, here's a ten there's a similarity here that matches up to alot of your other works here...it's hard to shake a style.in'n't.