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Are You? (Free verse) by NewbieMe

Don't you feel like dying? Don't you feel like wanting to go? Don't you feel like hating? Don't you feel like ending it all? Don't you feel like lying? Pretend everything's okay? Don't you feel like dying? And make it all go away? [Pondering and wondering. I know almost everyone has felt this way.]

NewbieMe 14-Dec-02/11:01 PM
I understand and I have edited the mistake. I just merely offered an explanation on why I had that flaw but I am aiming to improve myself. I just believe that pointing someone's mistake can be said in a better way. There's no need to use insulting words such as moron. Thank you for your thoughts. I will keep it in mind.




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