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it was red (Free verse) by kiki

I was blushing and the universe exploded into photograms and mania, into technically the-sky-ran-fast, always faster I couldn't chase it down, it was then I overlooked my ability to hear things the volume of rain, scalding of water, but summer came fast when it didn't have a sound and dark vast winds were tempting me to do things, someone dissembled my brain I thought, like learning to love sex in those days water and forgiveness became one empty motion, and when the panic came it slid off me like rain.

horus8 14-Dec-02/4:26 PM
also very well controled. the sense of restraint and it leaves the reader with a feeling of an involved evolution with the author.e




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