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Xmas gifts list (Other) by lunar

For him: 1)Wings. So he can be free from the tormment of his thoughts. 2)A key. So he can unlock the cage of his mind. 3)Love. So he will not suffer anymore. For her: 1) A map. So she knows which route she will take next. 2) A tongue. So she can speak what is in her mind. 3) Hope. So she knows these feelings are not in vain.

poetandknowit 11-Dec-02/2:45 PM
So now, I am PAKI. I see. If a poem is worthy of praise, I give it. This is not. Nor is there anything you can do to make it worthy other than rewrite it completely using better words that somehow form images. Why must you take "you fucking he-man woman hater route"? I am really quite sweet.




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