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Xmas gifts list (Other) by lunar

For him: 1)Wings. So he can be free from the tormment of his thoughts. 2)A key. So he can unlock the cage of his mind. 3)Love. So he will not suffer anymore. For her: 1) A map. So she knows which route she will take next. 2) A tongue. So she can speak what is in her mind. 3) Hope. So she knows these feelings are not in vain.

god'swife 11-Dec-02/2:29 PM
As well they should.

For him:
A key
Wings
Love

For her:
A map
A tongue
Hope

So he can be free from the torment
Unlock the cage of his mind
Not suffer anymore.

So she'll know which route to take
Speak her mind.
So she knows these feelings are not in vain.

Just an example. Write it down on paer and play around with it. The material is there, you just have to design the pattern.




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