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Xmas gifts list (Other) by lunar

For him: 1)Wings. So he can be free from the tormment of his thoughts. 2)A key. So he can unlock the cage of his mind. 3)Love. So he will not suffer anymore. For her: 1) A map. So she knows which route she will take next. 2) A tongue. So she can speak what is in her mind. 3) Hope. So she knows these feelings are not in vain.

god'swife 11-Dec-02/2:11 PM
Don't pay attention to him lunar, he thinks that giving anyone here praise somehow weakens the great poetry. I think your poem is transcendant. It speaks the truth quite clearly. I might structure it differently but so what. A map, a tongue, hope... these are some of the things every women needs in her arsenal. You know for years we had to steal them, and if someone like PAKI caught a glimpse of them in our Gucci purse, theyed burn us for witches. Now you know. Smiles to you from the birth place of Nixon.




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