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Tainted (Free verse) by necroscope7

Dark in thought Heavy of soul Every day You fight the pull But escape is not to be No help to be found Destroying yourself As you go round and round Something is wrong And it won?t go away It was there all along Since that damnable day You try to atone But your conscience denies it You?ll never be clean That fire has already been lit One act has doomed One who may have been sainted Now you sit used Thrown away and tainted

necroscope7 13-Jun-02/12:53 PM
Wow, thanks, I appreciate the compliment. I know I can be a bit harsh at times with my own comments, but i just try to be honest and straightforward, as i would hope for anyone else to be with me. i know my writing is farfrom perfect, and if people don't like it I want to know and i want to know why. It can be hard not to take it personally, but I know it will help to make me better at my craft in the long run. so in the same vein I hold no punches. maybe I make some people not like me, but hopefully by being honest I can help them to learn from things and become better themselves.




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