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Tainted (Free verse) by necroscope7

Dark in thought Heavy of soul Every day You fight the pull But escape is not to be No help to be found Destroying yourself As you go round and round Something is wrong And it won?t go away It was there all along Since that damnable day You try to atone But your conscience denies it You?ll never be clean That fire has already been lit One act has doomed One who may have been sainted Now you sit used Thrown away and tainted

asshole 12-Jun-02/9:02 PM
Although I would like to say something rude about your poem, it is clear that you aren't a naive poet . This poem is extraordinary, I like it.




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