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stifled (Free verse) by crin

i loved you but nobody will ever know i wanted to tell the world but nobody will ever know now you won't hear another word i loved you but now you'll never know i held my breath i held your breath

god'swife 10-Dec-02/11:05 PM
"i held your breath" sounds like murder, especially when preceded by "nobody will ever know" and "now you won't hear..." Come on 'fess up, you did it.




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