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68 (Free verse) by darby pyn

Cocaine desire amplified. hide in my skin disquise all the lies. transcend the guilt embrace the disease. live on my feet not my knees. fortune's form can change like the weather. blue collar genocide a social endeavor. raised in a pelt a hunted memory transferred from the soul of skin. armor reduced to style. belong to your own institution the religion of me the shelter delusion. ignorance and all it's condescension. allways content. dry. so fucking dry.

horus8 10-Dec-02/6:36 PM
beautifull, a hole in one, might be better if you refer to coke by its street name 'girl'. get some 'girl'.




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