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Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> (Haiku) by horus8

It's a mystery!? Could it be the tap water? I fucking doubt it. It's education!? Some people deserve it more. Just don't ask me why. Here's a well placed yawn. To go with your diplomas, and your poetry. Imagination! Can't be taught at any school. Except, maybe his?

horus8 9-Dec-02/8:33 PM
you saw black flag at a vfw hall? that's brave, and kind of interesting not that 1984 was interesting unless you like cocaine, tubesocks and mork and mindy reruns. i have never tried once to be black nor has that thought even slightly entered my mind. also suburbs? good try, but way off. i have when staying with my father's (while he was serving various parts of his combined thirteen years incarcerations on three different occasions) parents (in troy, mi) encountered the suburban phenomena of the "wigger" (pathetic eminem type of cretin), but i never fell prey to the blackness of it all or the alluring? "hipness" (john lind walker did) is it still hip to not be hip i forget?! anyway i went to a different school every year of my life (i'm a depeche mode, rage, nirvana, wilco, beckish type of queens of the stone blee guy) sometimes two a year so...i would go out on a limb as to say, your clever stereotyping of me is outlandishly vague and wildly reaching. that's okay, some of us have levels and others are just plain leveled. also i am thrilled you get paid to write. i mean someone has to make up for all of the real overlooked talent starving to fucking death, and coincidentally, i'd rather hang out with my no name actor friends 'on crack' than someone who flashes their income taxes around anyday thankyou. good evening.




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