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REALITY (Free verse) by NewbieMe

If it were another time, I'd spend each moment with you If I were in another place, I'd be there beside you If it could work out, I'd be completely devoted to you If things were to be fair, I'd be unselfish to you If this was destined to be, then I'd never leave you If it was... but it was not

Caducus 9-Dec-02/6:55 AM
You really needed to tell a story of reality here, it could be called anything because its too vague and formulaic, you can write because i've read your stuff so i really hope you complete this (vote held for mo)




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