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Fatty Nerd Trilogy (Haiku) by Agemo-Z

Cram it, fatty boy. Nobody wants to see that. Tuck that gut away. Strange under-cleavage Peeks out under Captain Kirk. Too-small Star Trek shirt. Flab eats Mr. Spock "Set phasers to 'Deep Fat Fry'" Try working out, chubbs.

Agemo-Z 8-Dec-02/6:15 PM
I'm glad someone caught the reference.

On a sad note, I'm surprised someone would actually give this a zero. Of my three poems this week this was the one I actually thought was any good (one of the others being polemic, the second being abstract). This one, despite the subject matter, actually has some good lines in it. Or so I THOUGHT... Now I fall asleep crying at night. Now I have NIGHTMARES over how people HATE my self-indulgent haikus. THANK YOU, Poem-ranker! Thank you for RUINING MY LIFE!




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