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December once again (Free verse) by sunfloweronfire

As you sit within the warmth of your four walls Basking in the glow of the Christmas tree Adorned with gifts galore Listen to the raging wind As it smacks against the windowpanes And see if you can hear The rattling tin can of the beggar sitting Two streets down Stranded in the shadows With nothing to embrace But the fading thought of those four warm walls...

god'swife 5-Dec-02/10:54 AM
Your poems seem to have a the black thread of hypocrisy running through them. You point out the weakness in others, which for me personally, is a big turn off. Righteous indignation is also hypocritical. Di you ever turn the magnifying glass on yourself, it burns but usually reveals more relevent and touching details.




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