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father Worked Nights (Free verse) by poetandknowit

father lived in a factory. he would pound, pound and pound all night long, never stopping, never saying why. Laugh and scream, pound and pound -- no lunch hour, not even a coffee break. Pound and pound, using the cat and mother for his steel.

Nicholas Monson 5-Dec-02/8:36 AM
Heh, PK, you're top division. Great stuff. No quarrel with it. 9




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