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nothing, as today (Free verse) by <~>

what if i were the one to turn? what if another lit my eye, lifted me so? what if you felt not the cold, because inside you froze? what would you say?

<~> 4-Dec-02/8:48 AM
how about a mobile-type-shape? like 'unsaid'?
i am experimenting with more organic shapes these days, p&k. but if would please you, i will write an octagon. or perhaps, if i am feeling adventuresome, even a dodecahedron.




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