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nothing, as today (Free verse) by <~>

what if i were the one to turn? what if another lit my eye, lifted me so? what if you felt not the cold, because inside you froze? what would you say?

<~> 4-Dec-02/8:29 AM
i'm not so sure this is anything more than a bitchslap, thrown up to air my wounds for a spell. but thanks for giving it credence and treating it as more than a pimple poem,which, i think, is what is ultimately is.




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