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nothing, as today (Free verse) by <~>

what if i were the one to turn? what if another lit my eye, lifted me so? what if you felt not the cold, because inside you froze? what would you say?

poetandknowit 4-Dec-02/7:57 AM
I am not the fan 1) of what if poems and 2) questions in poems. The questions are what we ask ourselves to get to the point of some sort of answer or resolution, which is the poem. But that is only my opinion. Intransit gave you a big score and he is obviously the general audience.




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