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ReplyTo a comment on School (a sonnet) by Nicholas Jones.

Nicholas Monson4 Dec 2002

Well done, Nicholas Jones. It should be in the sonnet section but then again it might probably be never read. Also a minor point. But the concluding couplet - died and lies! Come on. You have so much skill. I bet you can improve upon this and come up with a couplet that rhymes properly.Voted 9