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she said (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

bodily proximity, pheromones, chemicals and whispered tones, entangled lives, or lonely souls; this is not love she said, with a bright lop-sided grin, pushing me down again to the mattress' wrinkled skin.

mmm 3-Dec-02/4:42 PM
good poem, tho I'd not seperate the first two stanzas

and I like the title. You think it will be a overly-done, "you hurt me so its over" kinda poem. But its not, its right. 9




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