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Living Conditions (Free verse) by Christof

Dark October days, When it seems the clouds Have sucked the light into their cheeks, Always feel like this: The year's blind slope Towards winter, The burrowing mole In its grope Towards the warm womb Of the earth, The improbability of the sun And our place in it.

Nicholas Monson 3-Dec-02/1:49 PM
Demonstrates a sure touch with language but I am just not sure it has worked as well as your other effort on which I have commented.




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