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stung (Free verse) by Limness

With my eyes closed, Tender and swollen at half a dose Only the lids were seared. I was not afraid to look But searching brought this fresh burnt blush That makes them look so blue-- and if you would only drown in them, this salt would surely lose its sting as I would do in you

god'swife 2-Dec-02/8:07 AM
Try leaving the last line off. what do you think? If not could you tell me what it's like, to drown in him/her?




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