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Forbidden Love (Free verse) by DolphnLvr82

Something that should feel so wrong, To me could never feel more right. The time goes by like it doesn't exist. The world is shut out; it's just me and him. Our lips softly touch, his hands run through my hair. Our bodies become one. His hands are soft and sincere. His words are real. Everything out in the open; there's nothing to hide. Our every fantasy now becomes reality. My body trembles as thoughts race through my head- All fears are soon forgotten, As our eyes close and our lips meet again.

DolphnLvr82 9-Jun-02/2:15 PM
from checking out your poetry.. you woudln't seem to realize there was a difference in reality and fantasy.. looks like fantasy is the only thing you know about, this was a very real experience, and I'm 20.. not so teenage.. and it was a REAL experience of fucking a married man.. maybe you should not be so negative.. i've read your other comments to people, you're a very cynical shit head that should maybe touch up on your poetry before dictating someone elses!




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