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Forbidden Love (Free verse) by DolphnLvr82

Something that should feel so wrong, To me could never feel more right. The time goes by like it doesn't exist. The world is shut out; it's just me and him. Our lips softly touch, his hands run through my hair. Our bodies become one. His hands are soft and sincere. His words are real. Everything out in the open; there's nothing to hide. Our every fantasy now becomes reality. My body trembles as thoughts race through my head- All fears are soon forgotten, As our eyes close and our lips meet again.

beakism 9-Jun-02/2:03 PM
Let me ask you a sincere question: do you honestly think that anyone at all wants to hear about your pathetic teenage fantasies? Just as I thought. Keep them to yourself.




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