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Bowed (Free verse) by <~>

Did I find a chink momentarily bared when I loosed that straight and simple missive? Why did I dare? I will no more hide my eyes, it said for me who could not bring my lips to form the words nor my form near yours for fear of being pierced Once taut then emptied of quiver like a feathered thought I flew to you, true and struck at the heart

Quarton 1-Dec-02/7:10 PM
This is great. Well written and a strong ending. Cupid lives!!:)




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