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stung (Free verse) by Limness

With my eyes closed, Tender and swollen at half a dose Only the lids were seared. I was not afraid to look But searching brought this fresh burnt blush That makes them look so blue-- and if you would only drown in them, this salt would surely lose its sting as I would do in you

Limness 30-Nov-02/4:55 PM
thank you. would you like to know the source?




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