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The Way It Is (Haiku) by Tascobar

A fat child, taunted. Harsh words, spoken without thought. Law of the Playground

Quarton 30-Nov-02/9:06 AM
Not bad but seems a bit bland. Needs more vitality but still a 5 from your poem I derive.




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