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The Yule tide log (Free verse) by ==Doylum

christmas is coming the goose is geting fat but not as fat as your mother who remains a fat old cow

==Doylum 29-Nov-02/3:52 AM

Why do you build me up (build me up) Buttercup, baby
Just to let me down (let me down) and mess me around
And then worst of all (worst of all) you never call, baby
When you say you will (say you will) but I love you still
I need you (I need you) more than anyone, darlin'
You know that I have from the start
So build me up (build me up) Buttercup, don't break my heart

"I'll be a ten", you told me time and again
But you give a 3, I wait around and then (bah-dah-dah)
I went to the door, I can't take any more
It's not you, you let me down again

arrgggghhhh
Help me!!!!
Whats to be done to improve it?
You always help everyone else out, well not everyone but still

so many mothers, so much time




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