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father Worked Nights
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Free verse
) by
poetandknowit
father lived in a factory. he would pound, pound and pound all night long, never stopping, never saying why. Laugh and scream, pound and pound -- no lunch hour, not even a coffee break. Pound and pound, using the cat and mother for his steel.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
29-Nov-02/2:50 AM
wow! 10/15 aint bad..not bad, but dude does it ever bother you that you have the face of a mud snorting pig and the ass of a lowland mountain guerilla...i mean just an observation...you just keep getting more predictable by the fucking minute..un-fucking-believable, you must sleep well at night, tell your little toadies i said hello, and feel fortunate i didn't squat down here and take a twelve foot shit and play with it for about an hour, and start doing my new chick chick shaw chick sha-doobie shaw rap...it's dope and would leave you calling your "peeps", to adjust your votes, not that you don't every day anyway for no apparent reason other than the fact that your a fucking hack..i use to have respect for you man, but what? that's wasn't enough..you have to go and take the worst year out of my life, and say i'm making it up...then turn around and have your whore friends start fucking with the only good things in my life..you think that's fucking funny? you think i didn't have a shit life... FUCK YOU MAN! I WAS RAISED IN A TRAILOR WITH MY GRANDMOTHER....SHE WOULD MAKE ME GET OUT OF BED EVERY HOUR AND CHANGE THE CHANNEL ON THE TV AND MAKE HER A SCREWDRIVERs...SO DON'T FUCK WITH ME MAN...DON'T GO THERE1 ha...just..chicky shawing, but in actuallity growing up in a bad neighbor hood and getting accidentally shot (his horror story, so now we know what's wrong with you, you got shot in the head tsk tsk..no wonder) is quite trite compared to me and my crew my home boy 'chuckles' his parents have been divorced seven times each man...he's just waiting for me to unlock him...easy chuckles whoa boy....
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