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Deadly Rape (Haiku) by HolyKnightOfFaith

Little boy runs quick. A Large man chases quicker, Boy found in gutter.

beakism 8-Jun-02/9:23 AM
yeah, I like the way you've thwarted the reader's expectations by taking a traditionally subtle and suggestive form and producing a blunt, harsh image.




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