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biZarro (Free verse) by ErgoErgun

biZarro Robust faggots circling around you! in paint and a refulgent rainbow of color born of and reflected by the disbelief in your eyes! Welcome to biZarro world! Open wide! Panorama's a requirement to understand men holding hands and the true meaning of resplendent ants that crowd these beautiful streets. It's just so gay! Welcome to Californ-I-A. biZarro world! An underground subculture occult propagated on presuppositions output/ put out by you! That's right (honey). Attention must be paid! So give money and attention to the real huddled masses, the minority subcultures that pollute our streets demanding suppression or support, demanding to be noticed by other minorities, other subcultures, suppressed or supported by you! The populace that demands to be damned or redeemed! And as this whirling dervish of choice and responsibility races in robust judgment around and in you! (the paint and refulgent rainbow of color born of and reflected by the disbelief in your eyes!) know that you have just as much power over their little minds as they have over you! Know that you're just as gay, and biZarre, as the fucking faggot you hate and love.

horus8 27-Nov-02/11:18 PM
this is the first time in my life i've ever witnessed the total obliteration of a birthday pinata with a nucleur missile. Can i ask you a question? if you are an eighteen year old canadian 'chick' how pray tell would you get your material and opinions to structure this bitter mouthfull? surely not from someone else's opinion? because that would be just poor judgement and cowardly in your haste. since i can bet that they brought an adequate amount of resentment and confusion to the table with their piece to begin with, but with the hopes that it could reveal what enables us to draw false conclusions on situations that we are to immature to understand in our youthfull pride and intolerance. unless of course you strap one on too for pocket cash...then by all means..beat the dead dog back to life.t




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