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Lloyd Street Interlude (Free verse) by jdsnyd

I saw you last night ensconced in conversation ...and melancholy wells in charred vapor pools mourning time and the poverty of words I amended riddled intervals and gathered portions of harboured denial evanescing lament sage glows on the alter smoke rises bathing purifying lost love's cadaver dressed in burial clothes anointed and reposed blameless words that destroyed failed to heal but time mends time mourned In a shattered mirror of disfigurement I can look at myself again

Caducus 27-Nov-02/6:08 AM
NEVER chuck anything away, you could be chucking $$$$ away.
I think it ends how it was destined, And its got an identity now, mournful, sad, ironic, and to quote ' reflective so heres an 8




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